Creative Writing Workshop III
Sabah beckons me with the highly-motivating writing workshops organized by SPARKS.I did not miss the opportunity to attend the third workshop. In the four-hour session, the writings of all participants were shown on a whiteboard through an LCD projector. Robert Raymer, guest speaker for the workshop, went through all of them and gave us his valuable, insightful feedback. I felt honoured to have my stories critiqued and edited by Robert Raymer. He advised me to ease up the use of adjectives and adverbs because they punctuate the flow of reading. He also pointed out some inappropriate vocabulary of mine, which gave negative connotations. In addition, the writer told me to avoid making redundancies and unnecessary reports like 'I could see' and 'I could hear'. He brought home to me the fact that a good story is one which concentrates on specific details and a systematic plot development. A story replete with over-the-top vocabulary and voids of information turn...