Consolation - Form Two Writing Competition
Title: Mother
“I
love you mother “. Those are the last
words that I told her before she left me alone in this huge and cruel world.
She left me to follow father up there in the pretty heaven. Why didn’t she take
me? Did she hate me?
It had been three years after mother’s
death. I still missed her ever so dearly. Now I was the adopted child of Aunt
Theresa. She is the aunt I like the most. She looked similar to my mother
except for her height. My mother was a bit shorter than her.
I visited the grave of my parents
everyday. I would kneel and cry my heart out. After crying, I would drag myself
back to my aunt’s house. It was not far from there. My aunt was always
constantly worried about my well-being.
Every night, I dreamt about my mother. In my dream,she cried and said
that she was very sorry. She even said that she would always be by my side.
After a month, I still hadn’t gotten over the sadness of losing my
mother and school was about to open in
three days. I was very nervous to meet new people because I was a very shy
person. I don’t like talking to stranger.
The night before school opened I
slept early. It was 8.27p.m. I sighed . My stomach was making weird noises,
maybe because I was hungry. But I was too lazy to get up from the bed. So I
tried my best to ignore my hunger. I fell asleep.
I woke up and looked at my watch ,
it was 2.00a.m. Suddenly, my night lamp turned off by itself . Then, turned on
and off again and again . I suddenly heard an old woman’s voice. Saying:
“I watch to eat your delicate, young
heart. Give me your heart. I want to stay immortal,” She said and laughed.
My hair stood on end. Then the light
went out. It was so dark that I could barely see my fingers. Then, I felt a
hand grabbing me by my throat. I was choked. Then, a light came and the old
woman screamed . The lights turned on again. And I saw a pretty young woman in
a white dress. I looked at her face. It was my mom. She had kept her promise by
protecting me.
Suddenly, a weird sleepy sensation came
over me. I couldn’t help but closed my eyes. I remembered her saying, ‘love
you’ with a smile on her face.
The next morning, I woke up and ran to
my mirror to comb my hair. Then, I took a fast shower and put some decent
clothes on. I ran down the stairs and
said “Good morning, Aunt Theresa”. My aunt almost dropped the bowl from her
hands. I gathered she had not heard me talk for months. “Good morning to you
too, sweetie.”
She said with a smile. I chowed down on
my cereal and my milk. Then, auntie took me to my new school.
To be honest, I wasn’t really
looking forward to school but I wanted to find new friends that could heal the
wound in my heart.
I stood in front of my school gate, preparing
myself to face and talk to stranger. I wanted to stop living in the past and
keep moving forward. I wanted to make my mother and father proud and tell them
that I could stand own my own feet. I could heal the dark deep wound with my
strong will.
After two years, I am 15 years
old. In those 2 yeas, I made 5 best friends. They are funny people. Each and
everyone of them is different and special in their own ways. But I still
haven’t gotten over my mom’s death. It still hurts. I go to her grave without
fail and cry as I recall our fun times together. I tell her what my best
friends and I do. After telling her things about myself, I stand up and return
to Aunt Theresa’s home bravely.
“I love you mother, and thank you for all
the things you did for me and you too father.” I say in my heart.
I really want to hug her and
kiss her but it’s no use now. She’s gone and I need to move on with life for
the sake of Aunt Theresa and my best friends. Good bye. Mother.
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